Brent's first round of comments were several handwritten suggestions that were mainly on written style of the paper. These have been addressed. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Abstract: I was confused by the $\gtrsim$90\% Seyfert/LINER nucleir or $\gtrsim$90\% H II regions... statement. I think it's because of the three diagnostic diagram preposition. It got me to think that there should be 3 regions. Probably no one else would be confused by this, but it's something to think about. Perhaps replace "In fact" to "Within three diagnostic diagrams"? --It's been reworded Introduction: You mention the [O III]/Hb vs. [N II]/Ha diagnostic diagram here. Do you want to move Fig 2. to Fig 1. and reference your new plot here? That way, the reader can see it at the very beginning. --I'd rather the first figure emphasize the infrared spectra, since that's the thrust of the paper. ...yet optical studies typically show a much smaller percentage of ULIRGS is powered by... should be replaced by either of the two choices ...yet optical studies typically show that a much smaller percentage of ULIRGS is powered by... OR ...yet optical studies typically show a much smaller percentage of ULIRGS powered by... --Done Section 2.1: In the first sentence, would it be a good idea to reference the DR3 documentation that is given online? --I thought about giving a link to the relevant Spitzer website, but my experience is that the SSC changes these links (some of my SSC bookmarks are already out of date). Section 3.1: For the Long Low spectra, we're just showing them to be complete, right? Because the statement in parentheses (Long Low data are not used...) makes it sound like it's not important to look at them. I'd just get rid of the stuff in parentheses. --I thought of this too, but if I remove it then the reader may wonder in the next sentence why I don't describe the LL mapping strategy. Section 3.3: I found this section confusing. So, you are stating that EWs are not possible with Hi-res data because no background is subtracted. So, we instead use the MIPS 24 micron fluxes as a makeshift (didn't want to say equivalent) EW. Is that right? The first two sentences of this section can be scrunched into one to say what I've just summarized above. (if that's right, of course) Oh, should this imaging section be placed right next to the Spitzer IRS data since it's being used there or placed after all spectroscopy sections. It seems out of place after talking about the ISO spectra, but I understand your order as you have it. Just something to think about. --This is one of those instances that I have tried to appease two different reviewer's remarks. I guess it's easier to keep things the way they are, rather than juggling three suggestions.... Section 4.1: Here, I think that you mention X-ray dominated regions for the first time. You might want to put a reference for this region here because not many general readers will know what it is. --Done Section 4.2: ...PAHs for which the... could be ...PAHs where the... ..., there is no... could be ..., where there is no... ..., and is the not... could be ..., and where the feature is not... Just trying to balance the conjunction between the three pieces. --I have taken your cue to clean up this sentence Section 5.1: ...starburst galaxies systems. should be ...starbursting galactic systems. OR ...starbursting galaxy systems. OR ...starbursting galaxies. --Fixed ...in the optical versus doing so in the IR,... should be ...in the optical versus in the IR,... Just balancing both sides of the versus. --Done Footnote 2: missing \AA after 6584. --Done Section 5.2: (3rd paragraph) I was wondering if [Si II] emission XDR ratioed to [Si II] emission from HII is greater than 1 for all densities. Or is the similarity of the graphs due simply to a density effect? Can we separate the two possibilities? --I found literature comparisons of XDR/PDR and PDR/HII, but not XDR/HII (5th paragraph) The Schaerer & Stasinska reference needs a year. --Fixed Section 5.2.3: Can't we get the metallicities from the SINGS archive site or Kennicutt's paper and determine the importance of metallicity? At least for the nuclear points... That is, is the change of [S III]/[Si II] normally so small between low-Z and high-Z systems? a) John Moustakas (w/Kennicutt) is still working on the SINGS metallicities, using both his spectroscopy and values from the literature. He has provided me with 38 nuclear and 51 'disk' (0.4R_25) metallicities. 36 of the 38, and 46 of the 51, span a factor of only 4 in Z. This is still a work in progress. b) Unfortunately, we have IRS non-detections from most of our faint, low-Z galaxies. c) I don't specifically address metallicity in this paper, save for mentioning how SMC/LMC HII regions appear in various plots. i.e., I don't use the SINGS metallicities in this paper. Summary: First paragh I thought that you should change "large portion" to a fraction or percentage of the SINGS sample that you use. Just a little more quantitative. --I want the sample to sound "large", and 2/3 nuclear and 1/4 extranuc doesn't give that impression Second paragraph ...[Ne II] 15... should be ...[Ne III] 15... --Thanks Figure 5. I was confused. Is the numbering scheme in Figure 3 the exact same as the one presented in Figure 5? If so, great. If not, then you may want to change one or the other to like letters or arabic numerals.