A general comment: This may be a matter of taste, but I find the style of referring to observations, results, etc. as being "in" some author as awkward. I prefer to say that actions are performed "by" people, not "in" people. E.g., "...the work by so-and-so (some year)..." --Fixed Tables 1 and 2: It might be useful to the reader to indicate the aperture over which these quantities are averaged. (They are averages, right?) --Done Figures 2 - 6: It might be useful to the reader to indicate what the error bars represent. --Done Figures 3 - 6: You might consider replacing the light green lines with a darker color (even a darker shade of green would help, I think - e.g., I tend to redefine green in my plots using R/G/B values of 0/0.75/0). That color is notoriously hard to see when printed in grayscale and especially when projected. (Take pity on the poor astronomer presenting your paper in journal club and having to explain to the audience that, yes, there really are lines on that plot...) --Done Figures 3 - 6: You might want to tell the reader the source of the classifications (seyfert, liner, etc.). --I think I will stick with just explaining this in Section 5.1, and not the fig captions. Figure 3: The caption should explain the significance of the roman numerals on the plot, as you do in Figure 5, by referring the reader to the appropriate table and section of the text. --Done Figure 4: This may be a matter of taste, but I think discussion belongs in the main text, not in the figure captions. The comment about the excitation level of the Magellanic Clouds should be moved to the text, in my opinion. --Fixed subject headings: You might also want to include "galaxies: nuclei," "galaxies: active," and "HII regions." --Done sec. 1: I'm surprised you don't mention the series of "dwarf seyfert nuclei" papers by Ho et al. in your introduction, which appear to me to be a fairly classic set of references on optical AGN classification. If you want to add one of those papers, an appropriate one might be ApJS 112, 315. --I've added this reference to the Introduction. [I did already reference two other papers by these authors later in the manuscipt.] sec. 3.1: To me, "centered" implies a specific choice to position the extraction aperture. You only extracted spectra once, so you can only "center" that aperture once. I.e., you can't be centered both on the optical coordinates and on the infrared peaks. I found this paragraph very confusing until I figured out you were trying to say that the optical coordinates often coincide with the infrared peak, which is interesting and useful information that ought to be stated clearly. (E.g., "we find that the optical coordinates generally coincide with the infrared emission peak" or some such.) --Fixed sec. 3.1: In reference to the continuum fits, to what function does "first- or second-order" refer? A polynomial? Also, how do you decide whether the fit should be first or second order? What effect does the choice have on your results? --I have added "polynomial" to the text. I typically used 2nd order only for the 6.2um PAH feature and the NeII 12.81um emission line, since these are located in regions where the continuum has curvature. sec. 4.1: Should you also mention [Fe II] 25.99um? --I decided not to include it since i) we don't use it; ii) it's not 'prominent'; and iii) it's not 'high ionization'. sec. 4.2: You may also want to cite Madden et al. 2006 (A&A 446, 877) and Wu et al. (2006, ApJ in press) for relevant work on PAH emission in galaxies. --Done. I did refer to Madden a couple of sentences down, but I added the reference again. sec. 4.2: The equivalent width of the 6.2um feature will also be sensitive to the relative proportions of starlight and dust emission from the galaxy. (I.e., there may still be significant stellar emission at 6.2um). --Correct. Ideally we'd normalize by TIR, but the 23"x15" aperture makes this difficult. We could also normalize by the LowRes 6-38um flux, but we don't have LongLow for extranucs nor archival targets (over half the sources in the figures). I have added to the text that stars contribute to the EW. sec. 5.1: I would like to echo Daniela's comments about the extinction. In the complex mix of gas and dust along the lines of sight probed by our spectra, a single optical line ratio does not probe the entire dust column. There's not enough information presented here to demonstrate that "no sources appear to be heavily buried." --Thanks. I added the corroborating evidence from SINGS 24-Halpha comparisons to back up this claim. sec. 5.2.1: As discussed earlier, the equivalent width of the 6.2um feature will also depend on the relative proportions of starlight and dust emission. You might check whether the low EW targets also have a low IR-to-optical ratio. --Thanks. They are not unusually low. [MINOR] Table 1: "Markarian 33" really stands out as the only galaxy identifier written out in full. Why not use the commonly-used abbreviation "Mrk" instead? --No particular reason. ;) Table 4: Why are there 3 regions "IV?" Should the last 3 regions instead be "IV," "V," and "VI?" --Fixed sec. 1: "6300 A Halpha" -> "6300 A, Halpha" --Fixed sec. 3.2: "decent" sounds a little casual in this context. Something like "reasonable" or "acceptable" might work better. --Fixed sec. 3.3: "We do not" -> "The SINGS project did not" --Fixed